Wednesday, October 19, 2011

Defendable point #1
A.      Diseases actually spread more easier and faster through a slum because of the huge population and the poor environment.
B.      “The foul river carries not just local sewage, but also chemicals from farming estates outside of slums.”
C.      This shows that sewage and local waste ending up in their water supply could be a major factor in the cause of the diseases.
D.      And to make matters worse with having a deadly disease, is not having appropriate shelter to prevent it from getting worse.
Defendable point #2
A.      Most people that live in slums often know how it feels to be homeless with limited resources.
B.      “citizen that live with in a slum more than likely lose houses often or the house may be over populated.”
C.      Without shelter, health can become an issue.
D.      Many of these slums contain  poor sanitations as well.
Defendable point #3
A.      Slums have horrible sanitation because of their large amounts of population,.
B.      “With living in a low sanitationed area, people could catch large amounts risk factors that affect their health.”
C.      Living in that kind of environment is not healthy for anyone wanting to live a successful life.
Conclusion
A.      with these three points made, it shows that people living in slums are living an unbalanced life.
B.      Slums negatively affect human populations by creating homelessness, limited resources, and poor sanitation.
C.      These people are living a life that shouldn’t be lived rich or poor.
D.      So next time you think your living a bad life with a house, food, and family, think about the people trying to raise a family and survive in their environment.

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